2012年11月21日，也就是感恩节前夜，我将刚刚完成的《祸起萧墙》那一章贴到《独立评论》、《共舞台》，及其它海外中文论坛。立即得到一些网友的反馈。
共舞台网友“TIMETIDE”提出一些中肯建议。这是他的帖子网址链接：
刘刚的小说很精彩
http://gongwt.com/show.php?ID=152980
作者：TIMETIDE 2012-11-23 14:08:10
我将TIMETIDE建议转在这里，并放在下面的【】。
【刚才看了发布的章节，说郭盈华是女特工，“不管你们信不信，反正我是信了”。其实原来也信，但是有很大折扣：男女间的爱恨情仇很难让当事人保持客观冷静，并且只听到刘刚的声音，而听不到郭盈华的辩解。
小说文笔很好，题材更好。
看到刘刚说：“这是我正在撰写的反间谍长篇纪实传记，书名暂时用《孽缘》。请网友们多提建议”，俺是实在人，俺就当真了，给刘刚网友提提建议。
1， 最好用第三人称写。也就是写“刘刚和郭英华”而不是“我和郭英华”。 用旁观者的角度写，可以显得更理性、更客观、更宏观，可以跳出个人情仇恩怨的圈子，甚至民运圈子，而面向更广大的读者群体。并且，可以对刘刚有个全方位的解读和观察视角。
2， 要保留悬念和包袱。刚开始描写郭英华就将谜题公布，就没悬念和包袱了。不妨以自己的真实情感的演变为脉络来写：直到怀疑郭是特工时，再将前后碎片整理，经蒙太奇组合，再经意识流推理分析，再加上不断的事实印证……这样不仅更有说服力，并且会让小说更有层次，避免直白。
3， 纸质小说是无法打开链接的。作者得想法将链接的大量的丰富的信息巧妙地穿插于文章当中，让读者饶有兴趣地，不知不觉地读完。如果真能这样，小说将会成为以真实美人计间谍战为主脉的，以民主墙——民主沙龙——8964——海外民运为背景的长景鸿篇巨著。
当然，这些仅仅是建议。
祝刘刚成功。】
下面是我给TIMETIDE网友的回应，也放在【】里。
【多谢TIMETIDE网友建议。也正和我意。
我现在只是先搭一个框架，很多内容都是我过去的文章写过的。比如这第十章“祸起萧墙”，就是我在2010年写的。那时只是为了尽快将郭盈华的身份讲出来。现在这样搬过来，文章中就出现了三个相关时间：2009年9月， 2010，以及现今。我现在先保持这种状态，等我将前面的几章写完后，再来修改这第十章。
关于用第三人称来写，等以后有时间看看能否在这第一人称版本的基础之上在改编一个第三人称的版本。用第一人称来写，我只是感觉自然，顺手，就是将我所经历的如实记录下来，几乎不用任何构思，也无需艺术夸张或合理想象。
关于讲述故事的顺序，我会按照TIMETIDE的建议，回头将这些修改成按照我本人真实情感的演变为脉络。但我也会在其中穿插一些章节，讲述我在写作此书时的发现和感受，比如这一章的内容。
在我已经写出的这几章中，有些谜底看似已经揭开了，事实上，有些谜底到目前为止都没有揭开，就连我自己都不知道谜底将会是什么。比如，我们的离婚案目前已经进行了两年多，目前还毫无进展。郭盈华迟迟不肯交出银行账单。法官已经要求郭盈华配合做亲子鉴定，要求郭盈华提供13个银行账户的所有账单，可郭盈华方面的律师总能找出各种理由加以拖延。这女儿的父亲究竟是谁，现在依旧是谜，郭盈华13个账户究竟有多少钱，也是一个谜。从我们共有的账户里，郭英华就转走了40万美元。
这些，都有待于逐步去揭开。但愿那七仙女们都能坚持下去，坚持到所有相关的谜底被揭开。
我在网上发布这些内容本身就是反超限战的一部分。这赵岩、郭盈华一伙人联手造谣说我已经疯了，采取各种超限战手段，试图将我逼得疯狂乃至崩溃。我唯一的反击手段就是公开揭露他们的各种阴谋和手段。我揭露这些人的过程本身就是对他们的心理打击和精神摧残。这是一场游戏，是一场现在进行时的心理战和精神战，我们正在比赛谁能保持不崩溃！
另外，我现在所写的这些，主要是写给七仙女们看到，也是写给赵岩赵家军们看的，更是写给他们的上级领导们看的。我的对手是操纵七仙女以及赵家军的那些幕后主人，我是在同他们在进行博弈。而这些七仙女以及赵家军不过是这棋盘上小兵小卒而已。我就是要通过揭露这些小兵小卒的无耻，进而让他们无地自容，无颜见家乡父老，更让让他们的幕后黑手丢尽颜面，以至于最终将他们放出的狗都收回笼子里重新培训。
希望能提更多建议。】
言归正传，我在这一章中就讲述一下我在近日的发现和感受。
为了写作“祸起萧墙”这一章，我又翻看了一些当年我举办“墙倒众人推”画展的一些照片和录像。居然有惊人发现。我竟然发现郭盈华当年还邀请了几位十分神秘而又重要的人物来到画展，而这几位神秘人物后来都被揭露出来是中共的高级特工和间谍！
郭盈华邀请的另一个重要头面人物就是唐宇华。唐宇华从开幕式到闭幕式的十多天里，都出现在画展上，而且， 我就几次见到郭盈华和严文明同一个尖嘴猴腮的老头聊天，郭盈华还跟我说那老头是新认识的记者朋友。由于那天的记者实在是太多了，我也就没有更多地留意唐宇华。
上面照片是在画展闭幕式上拍摄的，拍摄时间是2009年9月18日，下午2时57分。照片从左至右依次为陈维明，王军涛，郭盈华，唐宇华。穿斑马格上衣的女士可能是记者。
唐宇华的公开身份是文汇报驻联合国首席记者，但实际身份是中共派驻北美的最大特务头子。画展十天，我虽然几次看到这个老头出现在我们的画展上，但一直都不知道这个其貌不扬的老头就是中国派驻北美的最大特务头子，也不知道他是文汇报的记者。我也从未同唐宇华有过正面的交谈。但就是这个唐宇华，不仅千方百计地破坏我们的画展，而且后来还千方百计地破坏我发起的中国茉莉花革命，还伙同赵岩一道多次对我进行威胁恐吓。我迫不得已，向FBI等部门举报唐宇华的间谍活动，唐宇华于是于2011年被美国FBI逮捕归案。
赵岩自称是纽约时报记者。赵岩多次同唐宇华一道出现在这次画展上。我只是到闭幕式这一天，才第一次见到赵岩。赵岩给我一张名片。后来，我才了解到，赵岩原本是中共警察。这张照片显示，赵岩在拼命巴结伯恩斯坦，尽管赵岩一句英文都不会，他依旧用各种哑语老讨好伯恩斯坦。我有许多文章揭露赵岩和唐宇华。
关于揭露唐宇华的更多文章请见附录3.
关于揭露赵岩的更多文章请见附录4.
本来在这一章中不准备提及刘路，毕竟他还远远不够级。但是，刘路看了我前面的两章后，竟然积极争取要成为我书中的配角。那我就给刘路一点面子，先贴出刘路和唐宇华在一起的一张照片。如果刘路能够提供更多这样的照片，我一定将刘路列为该书的男配角。
这张照片的拍摄时间是2009年9月18日，下午3时01分。第三排歪头坐者是刘路，刘路右手边露出秃顶的是唐宇华，刘路前面是冰山雪莲。
刘路看到上面的照片后，说他看不清他自己的面貌，也看不清自己同唐宇华的相对位置。那我就不妨给刘路贴两张更清楚的照片。
这张照片拍摄时间是2009年9月18日，下午2时58分。刘路身边的女士是民主党全委会的刘安妮女士，她曾经被赵岩骗过多次，损失惨重。
这张照片拍摄时间是2009年9月18日，下午3时01分。身穿红白相间上衣的女士是冰山雪莲。雪莲身后是刘路。
看过上面的几张照片后，相信刘路能够回忆起同唐宇华比翼并肩的难忘时刻，更能够看清刘路以唐宇华为原点的坐标位置、阶级立场、和政治面貌！
这次“墙倒众人推”画展，中共派遣了大量的重量级特工来对画展窥测，然后就是花大力气对后续的画展进行捣乱、破坏。也正是从这次画展开始，中共总参系统的老牌卧底郭盈华和严文明，联手中共国安系统的唐宇华和赵岩开始对我进行超限战。一场针对我的、旷日持久的超限战自此拉开帷幕。
好戏才刚刚开始。
附录1：“墙倒众人推美术展”邀请函
“墙倒众人推美术展”是由一些中国的人权活动人士主办。发起者包括方励之，刘刚，王丹，王军涛，魏京生，熊焱，徐文立等人。在画展进行期间，将同时进行各种学术研讨会。包括前驻北京大使洛德先生，美国著名作家包柏漪女士，自由之家主任普丁顿博士等人已接受邀请，将同主办者及参展画家作主题发言。恭请诸位光临。
展出时间：2009年9月8日 - 2009年9月19日
展出地点：National Arts Club
15 Gramercy Park South, New York, NY 10003
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Tear Down This Wall Expedition
September 8th – September 19th, 2009
The National Arts Club
15 Gramercy Park South, New York, NY 10003
Tear Down This Wall Foundation is very proud to announce that “Tear Down This Wall
Expedition,” a grand art exhibition tour, will debut at the prestigious National Arts Club in New York on September 8th, 2009.
Featuring a collection of paintings and sculptures by renowned international artists, the exhibition commemorates the 20th anniversary of the Tiananmen Square demonstration and the fall of the Berlin Wall. The mission of this exhibition is to tell the truth, to commemorate the courage and sacrifice of freedom-seeking people around the world, and most important, to call for your action in tearing down any existing walls that compromise freedom – the most fundamental of all human rights!
Intended as a traveling museum for the democratic movements, the exhibition includes art work featuring the Tiananmen Square demonstration, the fall of the Berlin Wall, and the current fight against censorship and the creation of internet “walls” against freedom. The exhibition will be a “hall of fame” for those heroes who initiated, motivated and activated those movements.
After the premiere, the exhibition is scheduled to tour Washington DC, Hong Kong, and will also visit Taiwan, Germany, the Czech Republic and Russia. Work by other artists will be added to the exhibition.
“Tear Down This Wall Expedition” is initiated by FANG Lizhi, LIU Gang, WANG
Juntao, WANG Dan, WEI Jingsheng, XIONG Yan, XU Wenli and other human rights activists who have made freedom-fighting a top priority in their lives.
Tear Down This Wall Foundation
A non-profit organization dedicated to promote freedom of speech and communication
Tel: (646) 368-5993
TearDownThisWallFoundation@gmail.com
Key Artists:
CHEN Weiming, who currently lives and works in Las Vegas after sculpting 18 years in
New Zealand, is well known for his work, including a sculpture entitled Tibet's Road to
Freedom, a bust of the Dalai Lama, a 20-foot statue of Democracy, and a statue of Sir
Edmund Hillary. Through his belief in the social responsibility of the artist, Chen brings his work to life not only with sculpting tools but with spirit and integrity.
Also trained in China as a sculptor and living in Las Vegas, YAN Yukun presents a different style in his sculptures. Yan is highly influenced by Dunhuang art, which is distinguished by figures created with a quality of refined and elegant ease.
ZHANG Hongtu established his career as a painter in 1970’s. Since moving to the United States from China in 1982, Zhang’s work takes a critical view of the Chinese Cultural Revolution, as depicted in his “Chairman Mao Series,” He is also well known for his deep immersion in both classical Chinese and Western modernist landscape styles. His recent landscapes are based on the Chinese practice of emulation through the copying of old masters. His subjects are traditional Chinese landscapes. However, he emulates a 19th-century European style and his medium is oil-on-canvas, rather than traditional Chinese ink-and-brush. Zhang was the subject of news reports last year after his painting “Bird’s nest in the style of cubism,” a rendering of Beijing’s Olympic stadium in a mock cubist style, was seized by Chinese customs authorities in advance of the 2008 Olympics in Beijing. Reasons given by the authorities for preventing the painting from entering China were as follows: 1. The colors of the painting are too dull; 2. The image of the Bird's Nest is no good; 3. The words on the painting are not acceptable. But nobody can stop this painting from being shown publicly in the U.S., and it will be included in this exhibition.
As an American artist, Robert R. Hieronimus, Ph.D., has been an acknowledged pioneer in the "New Paradigm" movement for more than 40 years. His highly acclaimed occult and symbolic Artcars and murals include the 2,700-square-foot prophetic "Apocalypse" at Johns Hopkins University, which led him to be hailed as "one of this country's best muralists" (Forecast Magazine). Art historian and critic Alan Barnet noted, "Hieronimus has a talent for winning the cooperation of the establishment while he lives and works in the counter-culture." Hieronimus’s most famous Artcar, the Volkswagen bus “Light” (better known as “the Woodstock bus”), was photographed by the Associated Press and
Rolling Stone at the original Woodstock festival in 1969, and this image continues to be regularly reproduced in media all over the world. A diecast model of Hieronimus’s painted Woodstock bus is produced by Sunstar Diecast in recognition of the 40th anniversary of the Woodstock Festival. His research into America’s symbolism has frequently been showcased on the Discovery, History, and National Geographic channels.
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Tear Down This Wall Expedition
September 8th – September 19th, 2009
Opening reception and fundraiser: September 10th, 2009, 6 – 8 PM
The National Arts Club
15 Gramercy Park South, New York, NY 10003
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附录2. 墙倒众人推，推倒中国金盾！TEAR DOWN THIS WALL Expedition
这是我们2009年六四期间发表的一份声明。声明强烈呼吁雅虎，谷歌，微软，思科等公司同我们一道推翻中国的金盾工程和绿坝防火墙。此信曾将寄给上述公司的CEO等高层主管，并得到了包括John Chambers等人的积极响应。
TEAR DOWN THIS WALL – Expedition for Freedom
“Mr. Gorbachev, Tear Down this wall!” This was the call given by President Ronald Reagan in front of the Berlin Wall in 1987.
Two years later, the Berlin Wall, along with its builder the East Germany Communist Regime, was torn down in 1989.
President Gorbachev, along with President Reagan, became one of the heroes in the 20th century. We are grateful to President Reagan, for his initiative call for tearing down this wall. We are grateful to President Gorbachev, for his cooperative in the fall of the Berlin Wall. He could have sent tanks to have the Tiananmen Massacre happen again in Berlin, but he didn’t.
The Berlin Wall was torn down 20 years ago. But there remain similar walls, visible or invisible. The wall at the 38th parallel has been the most heavily guarded on earth – still a restriction on the right to travel. The Green Dam is the latest version of firewall built by the Chinese government – still an instrument to impose upon ordinary men and women the will of a totalitarian state.
Standing before the Brandenburg Gate, President Reagan has said, “As long as the gate is closed, as long as this scar of a wall is permitted to stand, it is not the German question alone that remains open, but the question of freedom for all mankind.” Today we say: As long as the 38th parallel is permitted to stand, it is not the Korea question alone, but the question of freedom for all mankind. As long as the Green Dam Firewall is imposed to block freedom of communication, it is not the China question alone, but the question of freedom for the whole world.
To celebrate the 20 years anniversary of the fall of the Berlin Wall, and to embrace the call of President Reagan, we launch this art exhibition – “TEAR DOWN THIS WALL”. We hope it will be a moving museum of the democratic movements that happened in 1989, including the Tiananmen demonstration, the fall of Berlin Wall, and the collapse of the Soviet Union’s communist system. It will be the hall of heroes who initiated, motivated, and activated those movements. The mission of this exhibition is to tell the truth, to commemorate the courage and sacrifice of freedom-seeking people around the world, and most importantly to call for your action to against any walls to compromise freedom – the very basic right of human being!
We urge you as individual to speak out loudly: TEAR DOWN THIS WALL – any wall against freedom! We urge you to stand with all who seek to exercise their rights of freedom.
Mr. Jerry Yang, Ms. Carol Bartz, and Yahoo, if you seek to be a giant not only technologically and financially, but also morally, come and join us to tear down this wall – the Green Dam firewall. The private emails you provided to the Chinese Courts has not only put innocent individuals such as Shi Tao into prison, but also scared all the Yahoo email users in the world. We understand that you have provided human rights funds to help some of the victims. But that is not enough. We urge you stop help totalitarian regimes to threaten and send innocent and freedom-seeking people to jail. We urge you to be on the side of freedom. TEAR DOWN THIS WALL!
Mr. Eric Schmidt, Mr. Larry Page, Mr. Sergey Brin, and Google, you are all the victims of the Green Dam Firewall. We urge you to join our Expedition for freedom. TEAR DOWN THIS WALL! We urge you to take actions NOW to defend your integrity. Let the innovation and technology serve the people, not the totalitarian regimes. Make the google.cn as truth-speaking as google.com, rather than another tool serving Chinese Communist ideology.
Mr. Bill Gates and Microsoft, we urge you to join our Expedition for freedom. TEAR DOWN THIS WALL! Freedom is violated and denied in China and other totalitarian countries. We urge you to take actions NOW to use technology and expand your philanthropic efforts to defend the very basic human rights and dignity.
Mr. John Chambers and Cisco, we urge you to join our Expedition for freedom. TEAR DOWN THIS WALL! We urge you to be with us in building a router that can bypass the Green Dam Firewall.
For all the leaders of the giant companies who have done business with the totalitarian regimes, if you seek moral prosperity for your company, if you seek to promote liberalization, come and join our Expedition for freedom. TEAR DOWN THIS WALL! We encourage you follow the example of Mr. George Soros to become an underwriter of freedom, to support the development of an open, democratic and civil society in the world. You all have chances to be listed in our hall of heroes.
Mr. Hu Jintao, we urge you to be on the side of freedom. TEAR DOWN THIS WALL! All violent and unjust actions against freedom must be stopped NOW! Chinese has the right to know the truth of what happened on June 4th, 1989. We call on your wisdom and courage to confront the biggest mistake made to Chinese people in recent history before we can seek a new beginning. You still have chances to be listed in the hall of heroes if you try to follow the example of Mr. Gorbachev.
For those who restricted by the 38th parallel, the Green Dam, the Golden Shield Firewall, and other evil walls, come and join our Expedition, TEAR DOWN THIS WALL.
Martin Luther King once said - "The arc of the moral universe is long, but it bends toward justice." Let’s work together for FEEDOM, PEACE and HOPE!
Tear Down This Wall Expedition
Gang Liu
Juntao Wang
June 1st, 2009
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http://kqch.blogspot.com/2011/12/blog-post_13.html
前纽约时报记者发文，透露中共特务头子唐宇华被捕内幕
质问中共最大特务唐宇华的难弟、前中共警察、纽约时报记者赵岩
中共前警察赵岩同中央办公厅大秘书秘密联络的证据（有图有真相）
http://jasmine-action.blogspot.com/2011/12/blog-post_6.html
揭露中共最大特务的第一功臣是赵岩同志
http://kqch.blogspot.com/2011/12/blog-post_09.html
纽约时报记者赵岩受警卫局副局长齐东然中将直接指挥
http://jasmine-action.blogspot.com/2012/04/blog-post_10.html
赵岩《博讯》配合中央警卫局副局长齐东然中将进行舆论炒作
http://jasmine-action.blogspot.com/2012/04/blog-post_14.html
共军克格勃头子齐东然中将对我五顾茅庐
http://jasmine-action.blogspot.com/2012/06/blog-post_5198.html
严正学为我作雕像，运输大队长是共军中将齐东然
http://jasmine-action.blogspot.com/2012/09/blog-post_2.html
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